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Where is the peace I seek?
In my brokeness can it be found?

Between Illusions we are torn
Life sucks and then we're born

Held in my mother's gentle,loving arms.
I find peace,warmth,tenderness and calm.(KarenH-H)

The world stopped its run for eternal seconds
As you cried liked a child,as frail as a rose

gasping for air, breathless and shunned,
i gather my spirit, deliberately i suppose

With bleary eyes I try to see..
A different world ..so new to me.(KarenH-H)

Ian Paul wrote:

Hello everyone
I would like to make the longest poem ever .
The idea is that every one who visits this post contributes two lines at a time you can come back has many times as you wish and I will edit the lines into one post has we go along OK I will give it a title and the first two lines in the next post

Entangled still in silver threads
from taking pills in strangers beds

through heaven and hell tho the path seems unclear
we are kept moving forward, by the love that we share,

Yellow and blue the sky above
Why should we ask for more?

A rainbow appears after a storm.
Too soon for heavens door.(KarenH-H)

knock! Knock! ssh! I hear someone,
heavy footsteps just missing a heartbeat!

when i hear the wind i think of what we had to together and it fills me with joy, happiness and i remember what we had was special.

The gentle tapping of wind on my door,
Played musical notes on my heart

I look to the window, bright sunshine, Gentle wind,
Chirping sparrows, singing nightingale -- all freshening my mind !

the darkness within myself
kills my temptation to ask for help