eSnips Forums

Style my blond locks? Not!
They're clogging the drain -
Just polish my head.

* Nair is a depilatory, Ian.

Holly Jahangiri wrote:

Style my blond locks? Not!
They're clogging the drain -
Just polish my head.

* Nair is a depilatory, Ian.

Just polish my head.
till it shines like a mirror
reflecting the moon

reflecting the moon
pale crescents through a window
glimpsed on a highway

Holly Jahangiri wrote:

reflecting the moon
pale crescents through a window
glimpsed on a highway

Glimpsed on a highway
The remains of my wrecked car
Scattered, broken, gone.

Scattered, broken, gone -
"Just things." Can't travel now, though.
Neither here...nor there.

Neither here ... nor there
Is liability found,
Just in my pocket.

Neither here...nor there.
there is no difference
now with time travel

two seconds to late

Just in my pocket
Lint, a dime, gum, and cell phone
Folding time and space...

Now, with time travel
There'd be no "two seconds late" -
No excuse for you!

No excuse for you!
Wrong syllables for one line,
Not five, seven, five.

Not five, seven, five?
Oh! Ian's Haiku, you mean
Worried there, a sec.

Worried there, a sec.
Haiku is a tricky beast,
Always count exact.

"Always count exact"
Don't you mean exactly, Teach?
Doesn't fit, does it?

Doesn't fit, does it?
No worse than sec for second,
Now isn't that right?

Now isn't that right?
We've gone astray for Haiku.
No nature I see.

No nature I see;
My office has no windows.
It's TEXAS Haiku!