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![[Post New]](/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 04/03/2007 13:47:37
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lanaia74
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I come to you on this bleak desolate night
Swallowing my pride to say I'm sorry
To make you understand how much I wish to hold you tight
Begging you besseching you, please hear my plea.
It seems so funny, I don't remember our quarrel
Especially right afterwards, everything is a blank
I know I was mad, but after that nothing seems real
So be honest with me, please be totally frank.
Help me understand, what just occurred
I do know you were bitter and mad
I think something bad happened or am I just being absurd?
I think it was horrible, something really bad.
Standing right in front of you! Don't you see me?
Screaming at the top of my lungs, it's lie you don't hear me
Look at me! Hear me! Until you do I will never let you be
I'm begging you! Why won't you look at me?
Now, I'm starting to remember and clearly see
Our arguement was very intense, as bad as one can be
I remember you striking me, then the gun you plainly made me see
You Shot Me! I Am Dead! Now no one will ever hear my plea!
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![[Post New]](/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 05/03/2007 06:24:59
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Lonnie2
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As i was reading, i started wondering if the speaker was a ghost......
AND SHE WAS!
you led me right to it!
Lonnie
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![[Post New]](/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 30/07/2007 05:57:14
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H2S04 / TH3MIRR0R
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hy...
no,i do not wanna complete all the postings
with my verses..but,hey!
i just saw that poem,and these ghost-things
makes me wishing stay..
to stay here and write..
write about that world
of ghosts...and,right here,by my side
is one..just look at it! there it is! hey,
welcome aboard!!
Of course,that's my imagination..
but,u see,its good,
represents an inspiration..
and somehow,its a good mood..
good mood in which i rather write
cos who knows if when comes this night
i'll see a ghost
and,scared,
i'll be that host,
for fear?!?!
But,my heart is healed,
In my eyes,no tear..
So,one with a cold blood
As me
When we'll see a ghost
Who,mad
Will wish haunting me
It will just stand up,straight
Counting steps...and,look!
How many are? Eight!!
Do u know what means?
Numbers...
From that abyss
Of my mind..
Who ,now,
May not spell some words right..
Hehehe,but come one,critics,
Criticise my lyrics..
Maybe then u will see
As me
That ghost!
Come on,i'm lost!
Lost in a space and time,again..
Hearing about violence
Who has that blame?
That woman,from the poem?
And the verses,reduced to a silence
And tears,dropped away
Hoping for another day
To come?
A day in which a woman to smile?
The night is gone..
The dreams alike steel
Came yesterday..and now,reveal..
Reveal the sun..
I'll just wait a while...
And,another shot..
A bullet from a gun who
Now
Missed that spot..
The heart...there's somethin'else to do
Now..
To close these lines..
H2S04
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