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Past's birth's first moments
Lies a slow, lingering death.
But love keeps us alive.

Love keeps us alive,
Yet wounds us to the core, no?
All too brief...hold tight.

all too brief, hold tight
our parachute opens as
we fall through our sky

Lonnie wrote:

all too brief, hold tight
our parachute opens as
we fall through our sky

We fall through our sky
THUD!!THUD!!amazing force
Reality hits us.

Reality hits -
WE must wait a beat or two
Before we strike back.

* Note that "Reality hits us" is six syllables. Therefore, "we" must wait a beat (or two or three) to come into the Senryu/Haiku. ;)

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Before we strike back..
What's the reason of revenge,
When we can just sit on haiku-craddle,and laugh?!

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Thanks for reading!

H2S04

P.S: will be continued

lol

WTF?

What's a "haiku-craddle"? (That's like - twelve syllables, there, dude! = that last line's a haiku in itself, almost.)

"Haiku craddle"? Laugh!
Go on, I dare you! Laughter
Is good medicine.

Holly Jahangiri wrote:

WTF? What's a "haiku-craddle"? (That's like - twelve syllables, there, dude! = that last line's a haiku in itself, almost.)

"Haiku craddle"? Laugh!
Go on, I dare you! Laughter
Is good medicine.

Good medicine
Abundance of health wealth peace
Joy and happiness

Joy and happiness
Elusive dream-catchers, like
Faith, hope, promises

Faith, hope, promises
In my wrong spelling of words..
Was made in purpose..

Was made in purpose..
Because cradle is the meaning
I wished know the perfect ones

I wished know the perfect ones

Because i am not perfect
Good subject to laugh

Good subject to laugh

Cos the perfect ones realise
In what rely the imperfection

The imperfections?
Occupational hazard
Spotting them, that is.

Spotting them, that is...
But the eagle fly..
Didn't saw the nighingales..