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With His thought and his words in my mind
My heart felt awakening for a long while
I feel in some little time and tries
I will be free and walk another mile.... myangel168

Some little things only was left
How long will they last i can not state
Now on my mind I have to make ways
Look for my source for my daily needs
Set aside my way of life how once I lived
A king no more but a poor traveler.... myangel168

A stranger on places to go and to see
I must go head on to reach my end
Aware to meet troubles and problems
The consequences no matter what it will take..... myangel168

Worried and doubted now I am asking myself
Should I go on and take a new thread
Another spiral way for my final place
A new life's journey I will proceed
Tomorrow at dawn from this steel bars i'll be released
A job to support me I must start to seek.......myangel168

Some times I feel lose my self ,my dreams and the hopes
Because the despond tied me with the thousands of ropes(Mr.Romanticist)

Through thick and thin I got to move
This kind of challenge in life I choose
And no matter how tight the rope's tie
I have to loosen to escape and prove
That I can, I have and I must go on............ myangel168

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Determined I have to try and get this notice
It says here " blacksmith wanted" I read and get
A pull on the string of the bell hanged on the shop front
An old gray haired beard man went out form inside
With a metal, and a hammer on hand, on mouth a pipe
Accepted my handing him the streamer he had hanged.... myangel168

A small cozy room, I was given a space
Good for a shelter while on my search
A hammer, pieces of metals and a fire
Ready to make some sharp bladed
Swords, knives, bolos all to be pound
I need some strength and power of mind
Cause it is not an easy job its tough......... myangel168

Leaves fell down from the trees and blown by the wind
Petals of days were torn from the calendar page
Simple life with the blacksmith I admit
Almost forget the plans of a new world to head........ myangel168

A small metal sheet now I pound so hard
Turning sharp and thin as it must be that
An interesting object to own I would like
A weapon, dangerous but useful as I travel
It’s better to have one to carry on as I persist ......... myangel168

Full of hopes after the passed days
A delightful morning sun direct my way
Yearn for the desire to acquire discover
Get hold of the location that I may encounter
A land of my own to begin a dream revealed............ myangel168

On this day I have to leave, my master I have to thank
But it is late that he’s still on bed I better peep if he’s awake
Oh God, it was a shocking scene I hurried fast
My master drowned lifeless in his own blood............... myangel168

What a horrible thing I cannot recognize
What happened I shouted a loud to release
The air that I felt to have blocked my throat
Friends rushed by and witnessed and sight
Speechless and surprised by this stagger
Who can contest to this dreadful evil act? ............ myangel168

To be edited it to body of poem when fixed

Determined I have to try and get this notice
It says here " blacksmith wanted" I read and get
A pull on the string of the bell hanged on the shop front
An old gray haired beard man went out form inside
With a metal, and a hammer on hand, on mouth a pipe
Accepted my handing him the streamer he had hanged.... myangel168

A small cozy room, I was given a space
Good for a shelter while on my search
A hammer, pieces of metals and a fire
Ready to make some sharp bladed
Swords, knives, bolos all to be pound
I need some strength and power of mind
Cause it is not an easy job its tough......... myangel168

Leaves fell down from the trees and blown by the wind
Petals of days were torn from the calendar page
Simple life with the blacksmith I admit

A small metal sheet now I pound so hard
Turning sharp and thin as it must be that
An interesting object to own I would like
A weapon, dangerous but useful as I travel
It’s better to have one to carry on as I persist ......... myangel168

Full of hopes after the passed days
A delightful morning sun direct my way
Yearn for the desire to acquire discover
Get hold of the location that I may encounter
A land of my own to begin a dream revealed............ myangel168

On this day I have to leave, my master I have to thank
But it is late that he’s still on bed I better peep if he’s awake
Oh God, it was a shocking scene I hurried fast
My master drowned lifeless in his own blood............... myangel168

What a horrible thing I cannot recognize
What happened I shouted a loud to release
The air that I felt to have blocked my throat
Friends rushed by and witnessed and sight
Speechless and surprised by this stagger
Who can contest to this dreadful evil act? ............ myangel168