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Body shaking and mind was fuming with anger
Gnashing my teeth I take him off the bed of death
While friends and neighbors clean and lay him to casket
Full of anger and hatred this heart of mine to this tyranny.... myangel168

Who did this crime, who is the culprit?
Will there be no justice to this cruelty?
So this is true and real the phrase is real
That from where you live is where you will die?
What a fragment, I think I can not live with..... myangel168

For once in my life I made a very hard whisper to God
May I have reach a path to lead me right to my new life
Missing the people I once have in me that surrounds
May he grant me with the same faith like whom I left behind
Those who will care, those who will make me be inspired
That though I walked a dangerous fist to defend their life
At least I have someone to be with, as now I can feel
I am walking alone, fighting for nothing for no one but me
Dear Lord if you will hear me, please on my way I need a company!

Continuation of the longest poem

Determined I have to try and get this notice
It says here " blacksmith wanted" I read and get
A pull on the string of the bell hanged on the shop front
An old gray haired beard man went out form inside
With a metal, and a hammer on hand, on mouth a pipe
Accepted my handing him the streamer he had hanged.... myangel168

A small cozy room, I was given a space
Good for a shelter while on my search
A hammer, pieces of metals and a fire
Ready to make some sharp bladed
Swords, knives, bolos all to be pound
I need some strength and power of mind
Cause it is not an easy job its tough......... myangel168

Leaves fell down from the trees and blown by the wind
Petals of days were torn from the calendar page
Simple life with the blacksmith I admit

A small metal sheet now I pound so hard
Turning sharp and thin as it must be that
An interesting object to own I would like
A weapon, dangerous but useful as I travel
It’s better to have one to carry on as I persist ......... myangel168

Full of hopes after the passed days
A delightful morning sun direct my way
Yearn for the desire to acquire discover
Get hold of the location that I may encounter
A land of my own to begin a dream revealed............ myangel168

On this day I have to leave, my master I have to thank
But it is late that he’s still on bed I better peep if he’s awake
Oh God, it was a shocking scene I hurried fast
My master drowned lifeless in his own blood............... myangel168

What a horrible thing I cannot recognize
What happened I shouted a loud to release
The air that I felt to have blocked my throat
Friends rushed by and witnessed and sight
Speechless and surprised by this stagger
Who can contest to this dreadful evil act? ............ myangel168

Body shaking and mind was fuming with anger
Gnashing my teeth I take him off the bed of death
While friends and neighbors clean and lay him to casket
Full of anger and hatred this heart of mine to this tyranny.... myangel168

Who did this crime, who is the culprit?
Will there be no justice to this cruelty?
So this is true and real the phrase is real
That from where you live is where you will die?
What a fragment, I think I can not live with..... myangel168

For once in my life I made a very hard whisper to God
May I have reach a path to lead me right to my new life
Missing the people I once have in me that surrounds
May he grant me with the same faith like whom I left behind
Those who will care, those who will make me be inspired
That though I walked a dangerous fist to defend their life
At least I have someone to be with, as now I can feel
I am walking alone, fighting for nothing for no one but me
Dear Lord if you will hear me, please on my way I need a company!( myangel16

From the graveyard with feet on the ground slowly
My head down moving to a direction I don't nowhere
Questions of how? why? who? what? and where?
Solar or lunar eclipse might come my way no one can tell. ..... ( myangel16

From the graveyard with feet on the ground slowly
My head down moving to a direction I don't nowhere
Questions of how? why? who? what? and where?
Solar or lunar eclipse might come my way no one can tell. ..... ( myangel168 )

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That poem is very good....... I feel broken inside someone help me feel better.

Demon's_Eye's wrote:

That poem is very good....... I feel broken inside someone help me feel better.

To be broken and not feel love
is this to be your torment
will the nagging doubts
be for ever in your soul
but wait what is this I see
a glimmer a twinkle
it is the spark that heals all
it glows so deep and
from the center of your
very being its brilliance
healing your body and soul
now you are whole and
love is yours once more

Leave behind the darkness and bitter pain
Let your heart and soul be free again.
What's done is done,there's no way back.
You can not change what your life has lacked.
Let your love shine through and illuminate.
Yesterday's gone, it's not too late.
To feel the flames of passion once more.
One day soon it'll come knocking at your door...(KarenH-H)

Tears flow down my cheaks. I wipe them away, but my legs are still weak. From darkness to dawn my soul still sings that same old song. I listen to the words of my demon's within, that same old song that sings love is a sin....

Tiredness is not a feeling to have felt
Sadness is not an emotion to have said
Good things that can be seen to be pleasing
What will be done, what will be played? .......( myangel168 )

No mountain peaks to have not climbed
No rivers and stream stopped rushing by
No ocean deep to have been greatly swam
No dessert not to cross for a loved one....... ( myangel168 )

Forgive and forget dwelt in the heart
A great love is that knows no limitations
Works without any reason and conditions
Accepts everything with out hesitations
Give way for the happiness that must be unhindered
For that great love, the powerful mystery of love..... ( myangel168 )

Tears falling from the eyes should now but stop
An immortal love makes wonders it is no doubt
Gorgeous and smart the feelings that was found
No worry for love, will soon be here, will surely come back
Love is not a sin, oh no not, it is gift a reward
That was built, that was implanted in the human heart
As old as the time as powerful as the golden sun. ...(myangel168 )