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Didn't saw the nighingales..
Didn't heard their tunes..
And they stil search..

And they stil search..
In the present,
In the past..

In the past..
There,their eyes..
So black..so blind..

So black..so blind..
Are their eyes
When they hear TRUTHS..

When they hear TRUTHS..
They rather live in Lies..
That is their Perfection..

That is their Perfection..
In that,indeed,
Its found the Imperfection..

Its found the Imperfection..
And they stil see,again,
The mistakes...

The mistakes...
Found in past,
Part of present..

Part of present..
Are my words,now,
But when u read,are in past..

But when u read,are in past..
As pillars of an old city..
The city of Justice..

H2S04

H2SO4, you're cheating!

Holly Jahangiri wrote:

Senryu and Haiku:

Both forms consist of 17 syllables in three unrhymed lines. The first line has 5 syllables, the second has 7 syllables, and the third has 5 syllables like the first.

See

http://members.optushome.com.au/kazoom/poetry/haiku.html
http://members.optushome.com.au/kazoom/poetry/senryu.html

It's the subject matter that distinguishes the two forms.

I could be terribly mean and start a sonnet chain...

yeah,but i do not know architecture!

hehehe
i know only literature

and,if i think better,
neither that..only just ..a letter
to write it,i forgot//

i do not cheated any at all..i just twisted the sense of the haiku-cradle-game

hehehe..come on,i won't play..i do not like these kinds..
hope that my entertainment cheer up the atmosphere already..that i wanned to do..everyone was so serious..so,if i made some to smile,well,i did my task..

see ya on another kind of posting

hehehe

message from the outer-space:[perhapse from the aliens

]
"To H2S04 do not like haiku"
"If i think better,neither senryu"
"Why?"
"Aren't in asian language"

hehehe.. i think some tasted my joke..

H2S04

You cannot play chess on a shuffleboard.

But you can invent a new kind of wordplay. Topics are almost limitless here - start one!

yeah,i might wish something,u might be amazed how wonderfull it is..alike in that chess that u mentioned,lady..do u know? ..by the way,i am not a savant..so,i can not invent something..but,i am a simple human,and,as through my simplicity,i might show u a llink..i do not like playing games,so,neither challenges ,neither other kind of contests,because,as i said to many,i do not want be one who's tested..i have a quote for: "as i do not test others,neither others,to not test me,because otherwise they will test themselves"..so,concerning that quote,take it as a "rule"..so,do u want to change something into expressing poetry?if yes,u announce me..and i will tell u a simple way..and,indeed,my way,could be one very funny..u might smile concerning it, just a little bit..is not so good sometimes being so serious..better be a bit childish also,because u will smile everyday..

so,u wanna hear another kind of way,of expressing poetry?cos,u said in a folder of urs about something related with terms as "technical"..so,since u mentioned "to invent" something,i was thinking if u need something technical..have time,indeed,to think for

just announce me...during this time in which u'll think,taking decission,i will just look on forum,to find another poem,to tell my oppinion,regarding it..

not that i can not make myself a new posting..but,i like to have inspiration for..so,i have to read the other ones's poems,no? and,i really like it..

H2S04

Shuffleboard Chess moves
Confuse Senryu writers;
Go play over there.

"Go play over there!"
I say; "Go! Take your marbles
and start a new game!"