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From my fantasy series Of Atlantis, set for release in the fall

A child of light, a child of the dark
A child with powers beyond belief
A prodigy is born into a world of the light and the dark
One which will bring what this old world exactly what it needs from evil, relief.

A child that will bring love and hope, where it is badly needed
A child knowing exactly her pre-ordained destiny
A child who will hear the people, their pleas will be heard and heeded
One that will not be afraid, to shy away from things needed, meant to be

Foretold from a myth from long ago
This child destined from birth, to fulfill to defeat evil, in anyway she can
Destined to be the people's friend, not their foe
She will stand out, above any woman or man.

Raised by another, not by her father or mother
Death to them had made it's presence known
She would be the savior of a world very known to us, she will stand shoulder to should with her every sister and every brother
She, the prodigy, learning things from the seeds we have sewn.

Having supernatural powers from a race of long ago
Foretold of in one way or another, she having the honor and the respect of the ancients
She being like a Giselle in the wind as it blows
In my heart, I believe from the ancients, she was sent.

Her purpose here, to me has been made very clear
No reason to doubt the ancients and the clues that have been found
She will stand up to evil, to this she will never feel fear
She on a path ordained by the ancients, to this path, she will forever be bound.

Marvelous I get a sense of the grace in this work fantasy touching on faith But all in all outstanding

Best wishes and happy esnipping

Ian Paul

Hello..

Near the boarder of a land
Of fantasy,
Are the desert's storms,
Twisting the winds,
Spreading the sand,
And it is found..reality..
Reality that has been twisted
Once with time,
Answer to the questions,
Questions to the answers,
Now found..
Found in the past,
Brought in a present,
Told in a future..
But the dust,
Spread in the desert,
Told by that culture
Who now,lost,
But found?!
King Wan went to the North,
Spoke with his second son,
Their words,described the Sky..
That Sky who now,is the same..
The same as in that past who now,gone,
Showd the present day who fly..
Fly again that time...no blame.
The Sky,Qian,above earth..
King Wan went to the South,
Spoke with his second daughter,
Their words,described the Earth..
That Earth who now,its changed
And the same world,the same people
The same,but different,now,shatter...
The nature of all the things,revealed..
The clock is ticking,
The sound of a whisltle,
Announce death...she's still seeking..
She,the death,search for lives,
To be taken away...
And now,the husbands's wifes,
Remembering the earthly day,
Look at their body,now old,and cry..
Remembrance of the young times,
The past is witness to the changes,
People,now,about to die,
Saw the last moments,the dreams..
Now,comes the death,again,
Take that one's life,and the soul,fly..
Fly,fly away..
The Earth,Kun,below Sky..
Images of Heaven and Earth,seen,
The ancients's Heaven,is Sky..
Ch'ien,the Creative,
K'un,the Receptive,
The image described by King Wan,
Placed the Sun to the Fire's land,
Pointing the West..
Placed the Moon to the Water's land,
Pointing the East..
The second son,the second daughter..
Where are their places,in the painting,
As one is boy,one is girl,and their laughter...
Their're now old,standing on the cradle and waiting..
They wait the wind of noth to blow,
To bring the ice,the snow..
They wanna play,as when they're little ones..
But their past times,are gone
And their are shaking,trembling...
Their just alike,are twins,are one..
Their holding their hand..they're waiting..
The voices of those lost,
From the past,
Aren't alike those ghosts
That the people are talking about..
Are the voices of those who came across..
Across the time,across the lands of dust..
Powers of Water,transforms the energies of Moon,
The second daughter came,once with the past,
Came across the sea,riding the waves,
Brought the delphins back,showing the present,
There is only freedom,there are no more slaves,
She was the King Wan's blood,his descent..
Powers of Fire,transforms the energies of Sun,
The second son came,once with the future,
Came across the desert's land,and in his hand
Holding the sand,pointing to the Earth..
"Dust to dust" ,were his words,and the spread the sand..
Powers of Wind,moving the dunes,
The past is coming and the same voices of Egypt,
The same magick,the same incantations,the same tunes,
The same mummification processes,the same crypt,
For a blink of an eye,
Were back in present,alive..
The same body,die..
But the soul remain...why?
Child out of light,
Stay in darkness,
Keep the past with you,
Let the present say his word of fight
Against sadness..
Let the future dreams come true!
Child out of darkness,
Come to light,
Show ur smile above sadness
And in your arms hold tight
A flower of kindness..
Powers of Wind,
Made the sand to move
And another desert storm came..
Took with it the blame..
Now,above the desert's sand,
There's silence..no blame.
The silence of present day,
A new land..
Oasis...
And the palm trees,
Shelter for the thirsted ones,
Cos there is hidden water,if one seeks..
And,there's place for remembrance..
I remember the dear-ones,
I remember wishes,
Dreams,
And i'm looking now at the Sky,
I see the moonlight,
And the stars,oh,so bright..
I wonder why..
Why the people,die?
Who die?
They cry,
But no one die..
They live!
They die on Earth,they live in Sky,
They have place for light,place for darkness,
Nobody ask them something..why?
Those who know to be free,
Have no place for sadness,
They just drink their tea,
Look at roses's sweetness,
But the roses,bloomed are now,
In present..
But the present's past,now,
The roses,faded..
All its gone..but not the present..it exists!
The same smell of flowers who now,persists,
The same brown eyes seeking beyound,
The same giggle of a little baby,the same sound,
The same flute who sing,the same voice who say
To those who read
These words:
Good bye now..

H2S04

There is nothing to touch your work It is out of this world and I give you that in English please give us more to enjoy and ponder over

Best wishes
Ian Paul