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M4yt3

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Hope u enjoy this one.. I just wrote it!

Night falls and I’m waiting for you,
I look by the window in hope to catch your smile,
I see pink clouds that remind me of your honey lips,
I smell the fragrance of your special scent,
It’s your essence, that’s is locked in my soul.

As rain start to drop,
I walk into the night,
Tiny and smooth drops travel through my body,
they feel like your hands around me,
it’s a magical touch,
one I have experience before.

The wind blows and dries me off,
tender caresses surrounding each inch of me,
my skin is in total ecstasy,
It’s shows its glow,
just the thought of your essence inside me melts my soul!




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A lovely poem Mayte..well written..Thanks



Thorns and stings and those such things.
Just make stronger our Angel wings.

CALM
A fool is quick-tempered,
But a wise person stays
calm when insulted.






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Lovely images created in the mind, wonderful write indeed.

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M4yt3

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I happy you guys like it

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I liked that part with """" i quote u ""
The wind blows and dries me off,
tender caresses surrounding each inch of me,
my skin is in total ecstasy,
It’s shows its glow,
just the thought of your essence inside me melts my soul!
 


>>Thats why even the pic had significance..cos the pic has set the name as :wind fairy

the wind blows.. alike he moves smoothly, the energy,flows..

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M4yt3

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Thanks Mirror... I loved ur pic very in acordanse with the woman in the poem!

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;;) then,means u discovered in the pic parts of urself.. ;;)

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