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I was drinking a glass of wine and as I look at it I starting to write.. hope u enjoy it!
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As I sip a glass of wine I taste your lips,
the softness,
the body,
the stong flavor that describe them.

In each flavor I can feel you,
Merlot, vivid and softh,
I can taste the berries and plums.

Chardonnay, the whiteness in you,
the sparkling and sweetness of your lips,
the wider body and the velvety taste.

Oh, what a taste,
imagination and memories traveling as I sip each one,
Oh, what a taste,
what a feeling as I grasp your lips.

If only you where here,
tasting me as I recount our memories in each sip.

very interesting perspective of exposing the tastes of each sort of wine

alike Dionisos would describe with pleasure its fav drink

now lets say ull have to chose from these 2.. merlot and chardonnay.. what u will choose,if will be just 1 2 choose? ;;)

Th3Mirr0r

p.s: u should make an e-book in .pdf file with all ur poems

;;) that would be a great memory and when u will be older and ull read from that book,u will surelly have the most beautiful smile.. ;)

Th3Mirr0r wrote:

what u will choose,if will be just 1 2 choose? ;;)

Hmm that depends lol if we are talking about wine and wine only Its will be chardonay!

Th3Mirr0r wrote:

p.s: u should make an e-book in . ;)

Am trying to make a compilation of my poems.. and I want to publish them once I have all that I want...so most defenetly I will and this will be memories 4 eternity!

u remember when u said of common visions no? and that i said after "which one?" cos i have plenty visions? hehehe ) despite i do not drink any at all, i would chose chardonnay .. why? because compared,has a better essence than merlot

M4yt3 wrote:

Th3Mirr0r wrote:

p.s: u should make an e-book in . ;)

Am trying to make a compilation of my poems.. and I want to publish them once I have all that I want...so most defenetly I will and this will be memories 4 eternity!

then,u can follow also that link with the online forum that i left around here [at least ull note it somewhere in ur agenda.. and when u wanna make ur forum (that can be applied in ur site as well,via an embeded code) ,then,u ca start placing ur poems there..

my reccomendation it is to post poems wherever u go,here,or on another site and so on..

and,if u really are interested,in future,i can send u some sites,where i will join,to post some of mynes

if u will make ur own site perhapse in future,i can place a banner or something inside my site,as well..

i am a poetry lover always

hehehe

Th3Mirr0r

Thanks a lot 4 all ur imput and info!

M4yt3

M4yt3 wrote:

I was drinking a glass of wine and as I look at it I starting to write.. hope u enjoy it!
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As I sip a glass of wine I taste your lips,
the softness,
the body,
the stong flavor that describe them.

In each flavor I can feel you,
Merlot, vivid and softh,
I can taste the berries and plums.

Chardonnay, the whiteness in you,
the sparkling and sweetness of your lips,
the wider body and the velvety taste.

Oh, what a taste,
imagination and memories traveling as I sip each one,
Oh, what a taste,
what a feeling as I grasp your lips.

If only you where here,
tasting me as I recount our memories in each sip.

I taste this wine called life an savour every sip for you my love envelop every single drop so I drink so deeply to taste your your every essence and follow you to heaven there I see my true love and worship from afar so my love the wine I drink is fermented by your star

you have written a wonderful poem

I taste this wine called life an savour every sip for you my love envelop every single drop so I drink so deeply to taste your your every essence and follow you to heaven there I see my true love and worship from afar so my love the wine I drink is fermented by your star

You see this is what I ment inthe other thread....
Lovely writing in facebook I hace a group pf poetry.. but is in spanish the thing is that when someone writes a poem another user sometimes is inspired and writes some lines back .. some even another poem.. we call it a tertulia.. like a cyber gathering where all join in and make poetry...

So Ian this is a perfect example why I love much more the forum!

and like I said at the begining lovely writing hope to read more of you!

> u have the opportunity to read more from him >>

http://forum.esnips.com/posts/list/2853.page i never knewd he writes stories

until recently.. so.. i guess u will be enchanted to see what is there on the link he provides.

Th3Mirr0r