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Here is a challenge will any one enter will you Lonnie you have to use a name that is at least five letters long and it does not matter if it does not rhyme that's not important it the trying could we make this the longest thread on esnips do not forget this applies to the esnip team love and hate is a very thin line so chose your poem very carefully right here goes me first

L ong are the silver nights of moonlight on your face
o nly bathed with shadows has they pass there way
n othing to surpass the beauty as darkness fall
n ot even darkness can cower the moonlight on your face
i f only time were frozen and moonlight was in a jar
e ternal would be your beauty for ever more

Okay, @#$%... I'll play.

I
Am
Not
Writing poetry.
I
Leave that to the
Lovers, the dreamers, the fools.
I
A
M
Soured on sonnets.
O, Muse and mentor! You go right on
Nudging. I’m not budging.

ho HO

i see this is getting serious - and the name i wanted to use has been taken

two beautiful attempts that are worthy of a response

i need to think more. but i'm in!

Lonnie

C'mon, Lonnie - I don't think it's against the rules to repeat a name, either. Is it, Ian? It's your challenge...

No repeat away Names that is the interest would be in variations on the theme give it your best shot and that goes for all you poetic esnippers

Best wishes

Ian

Is that "No repeat! Away!" or "No, repeat away"? Makes a difference, you know.

Sorry forgive my bad grammar you may repeat as many times as you wish

Rushing to watch house

Best wishes

Ian Paul

Forgive my teasing - occupational hazard.

Of course it means all my friends are there to keep me on my toes - they watch with eager eyes to spot MY typos and grammatical errors. (They're rare, but they're doozies!)

Hello, Thank you fo telling me to join in the acrostic poem. Mama said I can join

This is my poem :

All around there’s moss,
Nearby on the logs.
Under the trees I
See, lots of beautiful leaves.
High up in the sky,
Kites fly up and down,
As the clouds pass by . . .

That was excellent Anushka and do you know the best thing about this your mom and dad can have a go too in fact any one because it is a challenge to all comers so have anther go and has many as you want yet did you know Lonnie is going to have a go soon she promised

My very best wishes to you all

Ian

had to write this one for my little niece anushka

Angelic cherubic ethereal
Novelty in whatever she does
Uniquely fresh
Spreading her wings
Hoping to reach the stars
Kind hearted loving unselfish
A blessing from above!!!

I can see it runs in the family don't stick at one do as many as you like and please invite others to my challenge

My best wishes
Ian

CLOUD - here goes another one

Cotton bales
Loiter languidly
Occupying spaces
Up in the sky
Dreamily.

sorry the previous one CLOUD came out in my daughter's name and here is one more.

SKY

Sprawling canopy
Keeps me beneath
Year round umbrella.

all of them wonderful don't forget there other topics down here if you wish to join in this is all esnips to now more poems I love them all

Ian