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[Post New]11/07/2007 15:25:12
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Holly Jahangiri

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Reply with your own Haiku. The catch? Your first line must be the last line of the previously posted Haiku.


Need a new Outlook!
An "out of office" error:
my mind's still on leave.
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[Post New]12/07/2007 09:39:40
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YH

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my go -

My minds still on leave-
Ing my past behind as I
Step on to the plane
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[Post New]12/07/2007 09:49:29
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Holly Jahangiri

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Yay, Lonnie!! Thank you. Where are you headed?


Step on to the plane
adventure awaits; the sky
blue and limitless
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[Post New]12/07/2007 14:43:55
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Ian Paul

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here can I join you on this trip






blue and limitless
are the oceans deep
dare I dip my toes
I've taken a vow of poverty. To annoy me send money.







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[Post New]12/07/2007 15:39:10
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Holly Jahangiri

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Of course! Everyone's welcome.


dare I dip my toes
in waters deep and murky
crossed by rogues and kings?
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[Post New]12/07/2007 20:43:03
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[Post New]13/07/2007 11:29:20
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Holly Jahangiri

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only has one syllable, Katrina.
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[Post New]19/07/2007 02:11:27
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mamta1

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Holly Jahangiri wrote:
Of course! Everyone's welcome.


dare I dip my toes
in waters deep and murky
crossed by rogues and kings? 


Rogues and kings
Brandishing swords and spears
Terror in the eyes.
[Post New]19/07/2007 09:14:44
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Terror in the eyes
Caught between two gleaming rails
Distant whistle blows
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[Post New]20/07/2007 03:21:48
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mamta1

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Holly Jahangiri1 wrote:
Terror in the eyes
Caught between two gleaming rails
Distant whistle blows 


Distant whistle blows
Trees talking to the breeze
Shhhhh.... shhhhhhhhh...
[Post New]20/07/2007 07:14:59
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mamta wrote:

Holly Jahangiri1 wrote:
Terror in the eyes
Caught between two gleaming rails
Distant whistle blows 


Distant whistle blows
Trees talking to the breeze
Shhhhh.... shhhhhhhhh... 





Shhhhh.... shhhhhhhhh...
don't breath a word
or ever tell our secret
I've taken a vow of poverty. To annoy me send money.







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[Post New]20/07/2007 07:42:03
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"Or ever tell our secret"?
What a line! Implying we
Have secrets to share.
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[Post New]20/07/2007 07:50:23
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mamta1

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Holly Jahangiri wrote:
"Or ever tell our secret"?
What a line! Implying we
Have secrets to share. 


Have secrets to share -
You and me I thought had ended
All that was there!
[Post New]20/07/2007 07:56:40
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Holly Jahangiri

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All that was there?
I washed you out of my hair!
(Too bad I used Nair.)
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[Post New]20/07/2007 08:52:08
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Holly Jahangiri wrote:
All that was there?
I washed you out of my hair!
(Too bad I used Nair.) 


Too bad I used Nair
for now i have to
style my blond locks
I've taken a vow of poverty. To annoy me send money.







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